小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

可可英语 2013年05月15日 11:36
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用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
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      My bestfrind is LiHua. He is my classmate, he has big brown eyes and small mouth. he alway plays trik with me. Sometimes I will be anger when he annoy me, but most of time, we have great time. I still rember what he dad done in last summer. we were going to shopping and i forgot my money. I felt so akward when i need to pay. He found my question and payed for me. I were so greatful for what he has done.

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