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某英文杂志新设“我的家乡”专栏向读者征文，请按下面提供的要点写一篇100个词左右的短文，介绍你的家乡过去的情况和现在的变化，向该杂志投稿。短文标题已给出。
过去：家乡小镇绿树环抱；小河清清鱼儿嬉戏；房屋简陋 街道狭窄；人们劳作生活清贫；现在：高楼大厦厂店林立；大小车辆驰骋街头；工业发展环境恶化；树木减少鱼儿消失；治理污染当务之急。
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My home My home is very beatiful in my memory.there were many green trees and fish turn around the river.The houses were simply structure,and street were narrow.While peoples were poor but they still work very hardly.Now,industry progress made deteriorated with envirenment.The trees and fish were disappear.Protected envirenment were important.Otherwise we will lose our home.
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