MY FAMILY
I have a wonderful family,I'm lucky to be a part of it.
Let me tell you about them.
My family name is Jiang, we’re a family of five.
They are my grandpa,my grandma,my parents and me.
This is my father,he is tall and thin with glasses,he not only helps me in study,also often plays with me.
My mather is a good cook.My dad and I are back home,there’s always a big meal waiting for us.
My grandpa and grandma are old but healthy,they often take me out to play.
My family is not rich,but we’re happy.We love each other,care for each other,I think I have a happy family.
点评：lucky在这里是形容词，所以和主语之间要有一个be动词。主语they是复数，所以后面的动词take不能是第三人称单数。很不错的一篇英文作文