2016年6月4日托福写作真题回忆及参考范文

真题回顾

　　Themostimportantthingforgovernmenttoimprovehealthcareistocleantheenvironment.

　　题目大意：对政府来说，提升公众医疗保健最重要的是去清洁环境。 此题目为绝对词的题目，波波建议选择不同意，采用承认合理性，反驳绝对性的结构来写作。具体来说，承认合理性，即承认清洁环境在健康保健方面的重要性;反驳绝对性，通过给出其他可以提升健康保健的方式来驳掉清理环境是最重要的方式。

　　范文如下：

　　Withthegraduallyraisedawarenessofhealth, howtoimprovehealthcarehasbecomeanissueofpublicconcernandinterest. Manyscientistsandenvironmentalistshavefullyrealizedthenegativeimpactofenvironmentaldeteriorationonthepublichealthandproposethatthemostimportantthingforgovernmenttoimprovehealthcareistocleantheenvironment. However, inmyeyes, theaboveviewpointhasoversimplifiedthecomplicatedsituation.

　　Indeed, acleanenvironmentplaysanimportantroleinimprovinghealthcare, becausevariousenvironmentalpollutionshaveposedathreattothepublichealth. Toillustrate, thehazeoccurringinlargecitiesofChinahasmadethousandsofpeoplefallvictimstorespiratorydiseases. However, itisapieceofoveremphasistoclaimthatcleaningtheenvironmentisthemostimportantwayforgovernmenttoimprovehealthcare, becausethereareothertwowayswhichareequallyimportant.

　　Firstofall, developingmedicaltechnologyisanothereffectivewaytoimprovehealthcare. GiventheindisputablefactthatthereremainmanyincurablediseasessuchascancerandAIDSacrosstheglobe, theappropriatetechnologyoftreatmentandtherapyisingreatneed. Asaresult, governmentissupposedtoassumetheresponsibilityofmakingprogressinmedicaltechniques, forthesakeofcuringtheseriousdiseasesandthusprolongingthelifeexpectancy. TheeleminationofSARSintheyearof2003 canbeagoodcaseinpoint. UpontheoutbreakofSARS, mostcitiesandprovincesinChinaareaffected. Immediately, thegovernmentnotonlyassembledagroupofmedicalprofessionalsandexcellentexperts, butalsoallocatedmassiveinvestmentinthemedicalresearchforvaccine. Unexpectedly, theemergencywasperfectlyaddressedandthesameistrueofcuringotherdiseases.

　　Besidesthat, governmentshouldplaceemphasisonimprovingthesportsinfrastructure. Asiscommonsense, governmentalsupportforpublicsportsfacilitiescancreateaplacefortheaveragepeopletoworkoutregularly. Obviously, themoreexercisepeopleengagein, thestrongertheirimmunesystemwillbecome. Thesoundimmunesystemcanserveasashieldtoresistvariousdiseases, whichfinallyleadtothebetterhealthofthepublic. Takemyownexperienceasanexample. Inmycommunity, thesportsfacilitiescontainnothingbutatrackindisrepairandaswingforkids. Inthiscase, theresidentshavenowheretodosportseventhoughtheymaybewillingto. However, ifthelocalgovernmentcouldinvestasumofmoneytobuildnewplaygroundsandestablishPingpangtables, Ibetlotsofpeoplewillbecomeinterestedinexercising, thusbecomingmorephysicallyhealthy.

　　Fatoringwhathasbeendiscussedabovein, wecandrawtheconclusionthatitisanexaggerationtosaythatthemostimportantthingforgovernmenttoimprovehealthcareistocleantheenvironment. Ifirmlyrecommendthatgovernmentshouldattachequalimportancetotheabovethreemeasuresinordertoimprovehealthcare.