SectionA
WillTourismBringHarmtotheEnvironment?
Inrecentyears, tourismhasdevelopedrapidlyinChina. Manypeoplebelievethattourismproducepositiveeffectsoneconomicgrowthandweshouldtryourbesttopromotetourism. Butwhatthesepeoplefailtoseeisthattourismmaybringaboutadisastrousimpactonourenvironment. Asforme, I'mfirmlyconvincedthattoomuchtouristsbringharmtotheenvironment.
Thebadimpactoftourismontheenvironmenthasmainlyexpresseditselfinvariousways. Onewayistheprocessofexploitinganewscenicspot. Inordertoattracttourists, alotofartificialfacilitieshavebeenbuilt, whichhavecertainunfavorableeffectsontheenvironment. Thisprocessusuallybreakstheecologicalbalanceofthearea. Insomemountainousplaces, treesarebeingcutdowntobuildhotelsforotherstoseeandexplorethebeautyofthemountains. Thenlandslidesandmud-rockflowscomeup. Anotherwaythedevelopmentoftourismhasdamagedtheenvironmentoccurswhentouristsgotoscenicspots. Sometouristsdon'thavetheawarenesstoprotecttheenvironment, andignorantlythrowtheirgarbagehereandthere. Somepeopleevenkillthelocalwildlifetoeat, whichbadlydamagesthebalanceofthenaturalenvironment.
Itiswrongtosacrificetheenvironmentforthegrowthoftourism. Wemustkeepinmindthattoomuchtouristsbringharmtotheenvironment. Weneedtofindabalancebetweensatisfyingtheneedsoftouristsandreducingtoaminimumthepollutiontheycause.
SectionB
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