2016年2月28日托福写作范文

2月28日托福独立写作题目

　　IndependentTask

　　Nowadays, childrenrelytoomuchonthetechnology, likecomputers, smartphone, videogamesforfunandentertainment; playingsimplertoysorplayingoutsidewithfriendswouldbebetterforthechildren'sdevelopment.

　　范文赏析　　

　　Forparents, howtowellplantheirchildren'sdevelopmenthasbeenahugeproblem. Whilesomechildrenaregivenmoretimeontechnologicalgadgets, othersaremoreinclinedtochoosesomeactivities, suchasgoingcampingortraveling. Forme, theformeroptionwouldbeabetterone.

　　Admittedly, playingsimplertoysorplayingoutsidemightbegoodchoiceforchildren. Simplertoys, namelyLego, areagoodwaytodevelopchildren'sthinkingonsolvingtheproblemthroughblockbyblock. Byassemblingthepiecesfordifferentblocks, childrencouldassembleanevenbigpiece, suchastheclassicLondonTowerBridge. Also, playingwithfriendsishelpful. Whentheyareplayingwithothers, theywouldcooperatewiththemtoplayingsportsorevensolveproblems. However, onbalance, bothofthesewaysarelimitedinhelpingchildren. Toysandoutdooractivitiesarerestrainedtotheiractualforms: parentsneedlotsofmoneytobuydifferenttoystohelpchildrendevelop, andtheypayagreatamountofmoneyonhelpingtheirchildrenfordifferentactivities. Forthoseparentswhosufferfromfinancialburden, thesearenoteffectivewaysforchildren'sdevelopment. Comparatively, technologywouldbeamoreeffectivewayforchildren.

　　Firstly, Internetviacomputersandsmartphoneareessentialfortheirdevelopment. Inotherwords, Internetprovidesstudentswithvastamountsofinformation. AccordingtoarecentsurveyconductedbyGallup, afterpollingthousandsofstudentsfromlocalhighschools, mostrespondentsclaimthatInternetistheNo.1 helperfromthemtofinishhomework. Whentheyhaveproblems, theywouldsearchreferenceonInternet. WebsitessuchasGoogleScholarwouldbeawonderfultoolforthemtofindsomepapersoracademicreferencefortheirhomework. Meanwhile, Internetisawonderfulplaceforthemtoentertainaswell. TheycouldwatchmoviesonYouku.com. Theycouldevenfindinterestingstoriesonsina.com. AllfunnyexperiencesareavailableonInternetwithoutcausingchildrentoomuchmoney.

　　Inaddition, videogamesarealsonecessaryforchildren'sgrowth. Whenchildrenareplayingvideogames, theymightlearnsomestrategicthinking. Forexample, whenIamplayingFIFA2016, IhavetomanagemyteammembersaccordingtotheirphysicalstrengthsothatIcouldbeatotherteams. Forthosewhorunquickly, itwouldbeagoodideaforthemtoplayforward; forthosewhoaretallandstrong, theywouldbebetterplayingmiddlefield. Becauseofthisteammanagementstrategy, Ihaveachievedmanytitlesinthegame. Learningfromthis, Iwouldallocatemytimeinfinishinghomeworkaccordingtomyenergylevel. WhenIamenergetic, Imightchoosethemostdifficulthomework; ifIamtired, Imightchoosesomeeasy-to-dotasks, whichwouldnotcostmemuchtime.

　　Toconclude, whileplayingtoysorspendingtimeonoutdooractivitiesisagoodwayfortheirdevelopment, technologywouldbebetterway.