1. Theartistsworkpushesourcivilizationtoahigherlevel.
改进：Artistsworkupgradesourcivilization.
2. Forexample, youworkinabigfactory.
改进: Supposeyouworkinabigfactory.
3. Youllfindyouarefitforbusinessandyoucanmakeityourmainjob.
改进：Youllfindthatyouarecutoutforbusinessandyoucanmakeityourcareer.
4. Wewillownnothingatallifwedependonluck.
改进: Wewillgetnowhereifwerelyonluck.
5. Hewillgetahighersalarytoimprovehislivinglevel.
改进: Hewillgetahighersalary, thusimprovinghislife.
6. Theirbrainisstillveryyoung.
改进: Theyarestillimmature.
7. Dissatisfactionmakespeopleproducedesireforbetterthings.
改进: Dissatisfactionimpelspeopleforthebetter.
8. Theycantanalyzeclearlywhatisrightandwhatiswrong.
改进: Theycannottellrightfromwrong.
9. Itwillhelpchildrentoformagoodhabitofdealingwithtime.
改进: Itwillhelpchildrenlearntomakegooduseoftime.
10. Thoughitisnotthebestjob, itaffordtohislife.
改进: Thoughitisnotthebestjob, ajobisajob. Hecanmakeendsmeetwithit.