小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

可可英语 2013年05月15日 11:36
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用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
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      my best friend is jim. he is six years old. he look beatiful we often paly the football together. he is funny and kindnness, i feel happy when we go out. he like eating mango, i often see him with a mango . his study is very good. we meet in school, the day he forgot take his book and i hlep him and share my book to him. he give a mango for thinks.

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