- 要求：
- 星光中学(Xing Guang High School)近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括：
1. 时间与地点：4月10日，大青山(Daqing Mountain);
2. 活动的过程;
3. 你对于这次活动的评论。
注意： 1. 词数120左右。
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
- 用户的作文（系统评分1.0分）
- 评语：
- 用户练习作文：
hello,everyone.I am english reporter of xing Guang High School . we will held an activity of climbing mountain. first of all ,due to climate sunny in April 10th. we will held in the Daqing Mountain in these day. we will meet at the school gate at 8:00.not only it has many insect and small animals.you can breath fresh air and drink natural water but also you can see historic sites. it can good for you decrease study stress. secondly we will take a picnic.we will have a performance about sing and dance. last but not least.I believe that this activity is very significant.
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