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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
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Before decades of years, mobile phone was created by human.And it has a wonderful development in the 20s century.Now , a phone can do many things, such as takeing photos ,playing games, enjoying films,But a problem appear as well. The problem is obvious.There is a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and they often overus it. They spend more and more time to use phone,but they tend to do things no meaning.They are wasteing their time.It is harmful for us if we overus our phones.We will recude communicate with people around us, and no time to sport or study.In result,we will retorgress. We should introl ourselves, recudeing the time in phone and try to read books or talk with friends. Then, our life will more clourful!
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