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真题回顾
Themostimportantthingforgovernmenttoimprovehealthcareistocleantheenvironment.
题目大意:对政府来说,提升公众医疗保健最重要的是去清洁环境。 此题目为绝对词的题目,波波建议选择不同意,采用承认合理性,反驳绝对性的结构来写作。具体来说,承认合理性,即承认清洁环境在健康保健方面的重要性;反驳绝对性,通过给出其他可以提升健康保健的方式来驳掉清理环境是最重要的方式。
范文如下:
Withthegraduallyraisedawarenessofhealth, howtoimprovehealthcarehasbecomeanissueofpublicconcernandinterest. Manyscientistsandenvironmentalistshavefullyrealizedthenegativeimpactofenvironmentaldeteriorationonthepublichealthandproposethatthemostimportantthingforgovernmenttoimprovehealthcareistocleantheenvironment. However, inmyeyes, theaboveviewpointhasoversimplifiedthecomplicatedsituation.
Indeed, acleanenvironmentplaysanimportantroleinimprovinghealthcare, becausevariousenvironmentalpollutionshaveposedathreattothepublichealth. Toillustrate, thehazeoccurringinlargecitiesofChinahasmadethousandsofpeoplefallvictimstorespiratorydiseases. However, itisapieceofoveremphasistoclaimthatcleaningtheenvironmentisthemostimportantwayforgovernmenttoimprovehealthcare, becausethereareothertwowayswhichareequallyimportant.
Firstofall, developingmedicaltechnologyisanothereffectivewaytoimprovehealthcare. GiventheindisputablefactthatthereremainmanyincurablediseasessuchascancerandAIDSacrosstheglobe, theappropriatetechnologyoftreatmentandtherapyisingreatneed. Asaresult, governmentissupposedtoassumetheresponsibilityofmakingprogressinmedicaltechniques, forthesakeofcuringtheseriousdiseasesandthusprolongingthelifeexpectancy. TheeleminationofSARSintheyearof2003 canbeagoodcaseinpoint. UpontheoutbreakofSARS, mostcitiesandprovincesinChinaareaffected. Immediately, thegovernmentnotonlyassembledagroupofmedicalprofessionalsandexcellentexperts, butalsoallocatedmassiveinvestmentinthemedicalresearchforvaccine. Unexpectedly, theemergencywasperfectlyaddressedandthesameistrueofcuringotherdiseases.
Besidesthat, governmentshouldplaceemphasisonimprovingthesportsinfrastructure. Asiscommonsense, governmentalsupportforpublicsportsfacilitiescancreateaplacefortheaveragepeopletoworkoutregularly. Obviously, themoreexercisepeopleengagein, thestrongertheirimmunesystemwillbecome. Thesoundimmunesystemcanserveasashieldtoresistvariousdiseases, whichfinallyleadtothebetterhealthofthepublic. Takemyownexperienceasanexample. Inmycommunity, thesportsfacilitiescontainnothingbutatrackindisrepairandaswingforkids. Inthiscase, theresidentshavenowheretodosportseventhoughtheymaybewillingto. However, ifthelocalgovernmentcouldinvestasumofmoneytobuildnewplaygroundsandestablishPingpangtables, Ibetlotsofpeoplewillbecomeinterestedinexercising, thusbecomingmorephysicallyhealthy.
Fatoringwhathasbeendiscussedabovein, wecandrawtheconclusionthatitisanexaggerationtosaythatthemostimportantthingforgovernmenttoimprovehealthcareistocleantheenvironment. Ifirmlyrecommendthatgovernmentshouldattachequalimportancetotheabovethreemeasuresinordertoimprovehealthcare.
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