When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. World Ocean Day, falling on June 8 th , is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
Ocean plays a key role in our world. Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature. Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions. For example, garbage can’t be thrown into ocean. What’s more, we can also hand out leaflets to call on more people to protect the ocean. The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is.
All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean. To protect ocean is to protect ourselves.
【导语】本文是一篇应用文，就世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿，阐述海洋的重要性并提出一些建议。
【详解】 1. 词汇积累
越来越： more and more→increasingly
重视： place importance on→attach importance to
重要的： key→significant
此外： what’s more→furthermore
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
拓展句： World Ocean Day, which falls on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
【点睛】 [ 高分句型 1]Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature.( 运用了部分倒装结构 )
[ 高分句型 2]When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious.( 使用了固定句型 )
[ 高分句型 3]First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions.( 使用了主语从句 )
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