GRE作文考试衔接问题处理方法与技巧(下)

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      另外,段落之间也有可能出现转折逻辑关系,相应的连接语也会发生变化,比如:

      Onereasonformyfundamentalagreementwiththespeakeristhatwithholdingsomepersonalinformationisnecessarytogainandmaintainpoliticalleadership.

      AnotherreasonwhyIessentiallyagreewiththespeakeristhatfullydisclosingtothepubliccertaintypesofinformationwouldthreatenpublicsafetyandperhapsevennationalsecurity.

      Havingrecognizedthatwithholdinginformationfromthepublicisoftennecessarytoservetheinterestsofthatpublic, legitimatepoliticalleadershipneverthelessrequiresforthrightnesswiththecitizenryastotheleadersmotivesandagenda.

      上面是一篇GRE北美范文的三个中间段的topicsentences,可以发现,前两段之间是并列关系,而第三段和前两段之间就是转折关系

      Amongsentences:

      Officeworkerstimeishardlyenoughfortheirownwork. Asaresult, bigcompanieslacknecessaryteamspirit, renderingemployeesemotionaldistancefromeachother.

      这两句话论证了为什么大公司缺乏必要的团队精神,员工之间感情淡漠,各自忙于工作是原因,缺乏teamspirit是结果,所以前后两句话之间通过连接语Asaresult表明了因果逻辑关系。同样的,句子之间也有并列与转折关系:

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