一：啰啰嗦嗦，说不到重点
典型失败案例：
Topic 1-Shouldcollegestudentsbeallowedtogetmarried?
Thistopicisveryinteresting. I’mveryinterestedintalkingaboutthistopic. BecauseI’malsoacollegestudentandI’mnotmarried……
修改方案：开门见山 直奔主题
Inmyopinion, itwouldnotbeawisedecisiontoallowcollegestudentstogetmarried。
Topic 2-Willmoderntechnology, suchastheInternet, everreplacethebookorthewritingwordasthesolesourceofinformation? (雅思真题)
Ok, thistopicisaverygoodtopic. First, letmetellyouastory: Ihaveafriend, helikesgoontheinternetverymuch. Everyday, heusesinternettoreadnewsorplayinternetgames. Sowecanseetheinternetismoreandmoreimportantinourdailylife.
Topic 3-Theimportanceofenvironmentalprotection
Oh, thistopicissurelyveryimportant. Isn’tit? Ofcourse! It’sreallyveryveryimportant!
二：中式英文人见人恨
典型失败案例：
Topic 1-Thehappiestmomentinyourlife
Inourlife, therearealwayssomemomentswhichmakeyourheartfloweropenedangrily……
Topic 2-Thepopulationproblem
Thepopulationproblemisaverybigproblem. Forexample, inthecitycentersofShanghai, wecanalwaysseepeoplemountainpeopleseathere.
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