考前10分钟还可用的四六级写作技巧

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      各位奋斗在抗击CET的朋友们,你们辛苦啦,希望下面的内容在考试中能够帮上大家哦!

      四六级考试越来越使模板无用武之地,阅卷老师在阅卷的过程中最多的是关注同学们的用词和句型的使用。

      高分作文标志

      1:四级120-150字;六级150-180字;

      2是否长短句交叉;

      3用词是否恰当,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;

      4关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词;

      下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项:

      1.适当用被动代替主动,这样能更客观的反映事实句子开头不要总是用we/I(比如写结尾时不用weshouldpayattentionto而用Attentionshouldbepaidto.)举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段:Itisthereforehightimethatsomeapplicableapproacheswereimplementedbytheserviceindustrylikethat.Thus,itscompetitiveedgewillbesharpenedeffectively.

      2.善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。

      如however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。

      比如说:Otherindividualshowevertaketheattitudethat…

      3.一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的代替太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现goodbadmanythingthinkpeopleopinion等等)比如上面例子中,applicable代替properapproaches代替waysimplement代替carryoutsharpenone’’scompetitiveedge代替enhanceone’’scompetitiveness(提高某物竞争力)

      下面举一篇我南京六级班上一位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子,看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。

      ComputerandIBySimmy

      Ineverforgettheexceedinglythrillingdaywhenmymotherboughtmeacomputerasbirthdaypresentwhichexertedatremendousfascinationonmesothatiindulgedmyselfingooglinganarmyofusefulinformationihadexpectedandenjoyaseaofmelodiousclassicmusic.ThatnightIwassleeplessfeelingthatthewholeworldbelongedtome.

      exceedingly替换very

      thrilling替换exciting

      sth.exertatremendousfascinationonsb替换sb.beinterestedinsth.

      google替换search

      anarmyof替换alotof

      Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessedtheincreasingpopularityofcomputers.Coincidentwiththeadvancementofscienceandtechnologycomputerspouringintothecurrentsocietyasafashionareappealingtogrowingindividuals.Itisnoexaggerationtosaywehavebeensubmergedbytheminlargemeasure!

      Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessed是一个精彩句型,用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;

      Increasingpopularity替换moreandmorepopular

      Coincidentwith…非常地道的词汇,表达"与…一致"的意思,替换With…

      Advancement替换development

      Pourinto替换enterinto

      Current(currently)替换now

      Appealtosb.替换sb.beinterestedinsth.

      Growingindividuals替换moreandmorepeople

      Itisnoexaggerationtosay经典句型,说某事是毫不夸张的

      Forastartwecanfreelysearchdesiredinformationatanymoment.Littlebylittleourknowledgewillbewellenrichedandourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.Additionallywecangethugerecreationsonlinebychattingplayinggamesordeliveringemail.

      Forastart替换Tobeginwith

      Wecanfreelysearch用了插入语的写作手法

      ourknowledgewillbewellenrichedandourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.用了非常精彩的被动