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once upon a time in a kingdom far away, there was an india princess called lily; she lived with her father in a desert, where the camel was always good and healthy… one day lily went off through the woods to find some food to eat up. one or two times she would stop to admire the beautiful views, and try to aim at those who bother her; when she returned, she dragged a big deer for supper… it was also dum for her to hit a very poor deer… sometimes her father would say, “well done!”
after supper, lily begged her father to let her go and have an adventure in the woods. her father agreed, and lily got her bow and arrow, ready to have an adventure. along the way, she met a very lovely prince, and fell in love with him at once, but how could she express her love to him？
she thought and thought about it along the way home. until she figured out that she had lost her way. she had decided to move along and try to find her way back home, at last she found a big and tall tree that had branches that form a room; just like a platform… she cut off some branches that made a small floor; then she made the furniture, of sticks and wood and mud. in the evening, she rested on the platform, and waited until the sun rise… at sun rise, lily woke up, she got her bow and arrow, ready to find home. but just as she was about to get down from her platform, a crocodile blocked her way, she sat there looking frightened.
at last some back men rode horses came to this place, they quietly without any word, kicked the crocodile down; and then killed him. lily finally got down from the tree or platform, and went with the black men.
at last they arrived at the black men hiding place, and they fed her with some delicious meals; during the great time that lily was having some men with white horses galloped toward lily; she was still having delicious meals when bomb! lily was captured in a cage.
lily was very worried, she yelled out for help! finally the black men came, and found the cage where lily was in.
they hurried up, and used their stick and opened the cage. the white men came, and were ready to battle; the black men made a signal to let lily get out of here. lily got out and scrambled. when the black men returned, they found lily clasped on the ground… they carried lily on their horses to their hiding spots, and fed her some water and some meals.
at last lily woke up, and saw the black men; she went to hug them and say thanks for saving her. the next day the black men took lily to find her parents. lily asked for a bowl of porridge as a meal, and set off on their black horse. along the way, they found a camp place; it was where lily’s father lived! lily jumped off the black horse, and ran to her father and hugged him; they were all very, very happy.
when the king saw the black men, he was very angry. but lily said to him; “father, these are the men that saved me from the white men that had captured me, they are amazing!” the king thought about this for a moment, and so decided to let the black men go in peace.
at last lily was at home, his father was so very glad to see her. during their happiness together, the black men came back and prepared a special feast for everyone to enjoy. the music began to blow, and they started to dance up and down and twirling about in the air…
they ate their meals, and drank some porridge, and lived pretty happy. one day when the black men were about to leave, the king asked; “is there something that you would like me to give to you？” “dear king,” replied one of the black men, “i would love you to grant me a very happy wish your honor, and that is to let all the poor people survive from the dangerous stuff…” the black men wish was at once granted, and all that was left was the action and the build.
before the only time the king knew, that the black men was killed, he killed himself, with always a smile on his face…
lily on the other hand, was very sad about the wish; but she too, had always a smile…
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once upon a time in a kingdom far away, there was an india princess called lily; she lived with her father in a desert, where the camel was always good and healthy… one day lily went off through the woods to find some food to eat up. one or two times she would stop to admire the beautiful views, and try to aim at those who bother her; when she returned, she dragged a big deer for supper… it was also dum for her to hit a very poor deer… sometimes her father would say, “well done!”
after supper, lily begged her father to let her go and have an adventure in the woods. her father agreed, and lily got her bow and arrow, ready to have an adventure. along the way, she met a very lovely prince, and fell in love with him at once, but how could she express her love to him？
she thought and thought about it along the way home. until she figured out that she had lost her way. she had decided to move along and try to find her way back home, at last she found a big and tall tree that had branches that form a room; just like a platform… she cut off some branches that made a small floor; then she made the riding horses came to this place, they stick to open the cage. the white men came, and were ready to battle; the black men made a signal to let lily get out of here. lily got out and scrambled. when the black men returned, they found lily clasped on the ground… they carried lily on their horses to their hiding spots, and fed her some water and some meals.
at last lily woke up, and saw the black men; she went to hug them and say thanks for saving her. the next day the black men tookon her face…
四年级:欧阳雨鹭
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